What is this?

Mixed signals can leas to this.

So much was said,

yet nothing really.

--- I swore you wanted a kiss


(leaned in) you said, "What is this?"

Reviews

[Horizons]

Lines're well constructed. Nice flow of ink.

[Sami Khalil]

A marvelous write on mixed signals...:)

[Inda]

Thank you!!!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[plainme]

An endless moment that sometimes stays till the end of times in our minds, simply transcribed into 4 lines. Well done, I love the flow and the simpleness of this poem that represents a feeling/situation that proves to be anything but that.

[Inda]

Thanks you for this review; im glad you got so mich from this piece! :D

[Pax]

oh, those moments you just wish you havn't done it... :)
this is so short but many could relate to its words...
nicely done!

[Inda]

Thank you and yeah that moment is one we all can identify.