I'm not free

-I'm not free-


The heart is a bee

Searching for a flower

To devour,

But it is free, unlike me.

Reviews

[Quiet Child]

wonderful! absolutely love it! great write, keep it up (:

[s y e]

Amazing Inda -- Just amazing.

[Adam Whitworth]

thankyou for this poem Inda

[Inda]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The plot lines in this one...the personification within the read...you take the rhyme and convey this throughout the short narrative...how the heart is finding something to cling to...

[Inda]

Got it perfectly!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I got to read this several hours ago...good to see a short write to review...instead of the long ones...

[Laminators Dubai]

im giggling....its awesomely funny!

so sassy....
keep sharing!!!!!^^

[Inda]

Glad you enjoyed it!