Now Stay

Now Stay

 

Crunched up,

the words don’t stop

flowing.

My anxiety’s growing

day by day.

Won’t you throw

some rhymes my way?

Please don’t go,

I wrote you an ode,

now stay.

Reviews

[Pollai]

A feeling of longing that ends with a touch of desperation, a good succinct write :)

[Quiet Child]

gives an odd feeling but, i love it all the same.

[Inda]

Thank you, your reviews mean a lot!

[Quiet Child]

your welcome, i like reading the things you write.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good little rhythm. Great job inda

[Inda]

Thank you!!

[Laminators Dubai]

ok!
we can do that for you....i guess....lol

[Inda]

If it was that easy right?

[Laminators Dubai]

depends if im not in fever...
if im not than i can spend my night...eyes wide open
and if mum says yess....
thats why i used 'i guess'

lol