Banana?

Banana?

A Poem by Inda

Banana?

 

Searching for that line,

that rhyme

that moves you so,

tells you what direction to go.

That stanza that makes you feel

 I could steal

your heart

or tear it apart.

Where’s that word that makes you adore

me? What’s the right thing that won’t bore

or push you away?

Could you throw a clue my way?

© 2013 Inda


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has a touch of emotion, really connects the reader to the writing. absolutely adore it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it!
Quiet Child

11 Years Ago

you're welcome!
Orange. This is so pure. You manage to visualise the thoughts of a longing and aching heart, I'm sure many of us can agree with that. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Means a lot.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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