in Time

in Time

A Poem by Inda

In Time

 

Last thing she said was, “I’m sorry,

but you really shouldn’t worry,

everything will be just fine;

all wounds heal in time.”

 

-Time has passed,

the pain has not,

the heart's frayed;

I’m still wishing you stayed.

© 2013 Inda


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its hard with emotions sometimes. it makes you feel for the writer, just needs to be a bit stronger. regardless, its wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quiet Child

11 Years Ago

your welcome! i haven't been able to get on in the last three months, trying to catch everything up... read more
Inda

11 Years Ago

I been there.
Quiet Child

11 Years Ago

i will review some more asap!
It's easy to say things, but it's harder to keep them true. Lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice little heartbreak ode Inda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..

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