Worn out Voice

Worn out Voice

Worn out

voice shouts

at the ceiling,

it’s hard to keep quiet with all

the screaming.

Glasses break against the wall,

 plates shatter,

But all I see is her face,

The only broken piece

That matters.

Reviews

[plainme]

I find it strange, very strange that people read these little powerful comments and don't take the time to tell you what they think about it, well, I guess that's writerscafe for you.

I see a man in the bed, who's shouting in his head, with eyes wide open, facing the ceiling. The rest kinda illustrates what's going on in his head, and that his thoughts might go crazy and want to break things but like you say, she's broken, and that's what counts.

I love it!

[Inda]

I'm glad it made you liked it and yes it is very strange. :)

[Quiet Child]

strange feeling of twists and turns, kind of all over the place. its still in a way that makes sense though. its something to be adorned with roses.

[Inda]

Thanks, it is a bit strange; it's what i like about it!

[Quiet Child]

great! me too (: