Hold

Hold

A Poem by Inda

Hold


Just cause

For her pause,

-Holds for applause.

A star shining bright,

brightening the night

-slowly fading out of sight.

The curtain falls,

no one calls;

time by no means stalls.

Her heart grows cold

and weak and old.

-In time it too will hold.

 

© 2013 Inda


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It kinda has the same 'feel' as 'Worn out Voice', it's a nice combination you're using here. Great ink!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, i wrote them back to back so i thinks that's why you get the same mood if you will.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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