Too Late

Too Late

 

Tried

and failed.

Pride-

a veil.

I should

or rather could,

but it’s late.

Now death waits.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

sorry to sound so cliche but...these are the times that try men's souls. it is good that you have writing as an outlet. write, write and write some more....get drunk if you must and write then as well but remember that you have value and that there is another rainbow out there somewhere with your name on it. peace...

[Inda]

Don't worry, most of this is just ideas that enter my head. I'm doing all right. But i appreciate the concern.

[Inda]

Regret and time... it's not turning, it's too late... you say so much here, within 8 well skilled lines...

- Elisa

[Inda]

:)) Thanks.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhyme..............................