Silver Lines

Silver Lines

 

Silver lines

Run across

The plains;

Adorn the tiles

Of my bathroom floor.

Silver rhymes,

Vivid and gross;

Growing pains,

Beauty dies, time flies

-heard it all before.

Reviews

First I thought this was an acrostic one, but then, I noticed it goes deeper, and it seems in this one you speak out of a body, or death, or just flying above yourself... a deja vu with the past... litterally. And the bathroom tile patterns...

Great work.

- Elisa

[quinfinn]

the more i read this the better i like it and the more i gleaned from it. less is most definitely sometimes more... nice!