What's that?

What's that?

A Poem by Inda

What’s that?

 

Cold hands,


a stare.


the heart understands


There’s something there.


-Something new,


what it is, I wish I knew.

© 2013 Inda


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You will find it, when you watch closer and dig deeper, maybe not now, but in time....
I feel a half-way connection, but there is much more...

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


when you see the stranger in your lover's eyes, feel that coolness in their touch and feel nothing from them...it is always too late. sad, but there it is. this is agonizing to read...i hate these memories. well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, means a lot that you take the time. :)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always welcome, poet

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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