Does it Show?

Does it Show?

A Poem by Inda

Does it Show?

 


Who am I?


I’ll never know.


If I love her, then why


is it hard to show?

© 2013 Inda


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because there is often a part of us that we hold back for so long that we are not sure we are capable of love...we become a different person after so many heartbreaks..we recede within our walls...

hide behind masks of protection...

and love from such a distance, the other person never even feels it.

i could used to this...reading your poetry..

damn good stuff.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you, means a lot.



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simple and straighforward :) i like the fact that the author questions himself and his feelings in just four lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


because there is often a part of us that we hold back for so long that we are not sure we are capable of love...we become a different person after so many heartbreaks..we recede within our walls...

hide behind masks of protection...

and love from such a distance, the other person never even feels it.

i could used to this...reading your poetry..

damn good stuff.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you, means a lot.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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