The Public

The Public

A Poem by Inda
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The public is sadly dumb and it is worrisome.

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The Public

 

Facts; where have they gone?

Integrity- stands alone.

No more truth,

for that brute

cannot understand,

begin to comprehend

all that is at stake.

He’s all emotions.

-step on the brake,

just go through the motions

and do what you want,

he is insignificant!

The public grows numb

-dumb.

 

© 2013 Inda


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It worries me too, the state of the public. A scary part that we all constitute it, so how much of it is our fault. At least you do your part here with this piece :). I was a bit confused in the middle with the punctuation I missed some of the pauses but upon going over it again it fell into place. Good write Inda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree! 100% AGREED!

Awesome job on this write, Inda.

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I'll have to agree with this one, you get to the point in a creative way.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure

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Inda
Inda

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