The Edge

The Edge

 

Tears

glisten,

fears

have risen.

Stars fade,

heartache

soldiers on;

love on the ledge

of reason’s edge.

-Isn’t it fun?

Reviews

[Pollai]

Really nice piece here, you're really good at using just a few words but putting them together in a way to have strong imagery and description and this is a prime example of your capabilities. Keep it up I really enjoy your writes :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great rhyme and flow. Great work Inda

[s y e]

Wowe, I loved this! :-) This was excellently written and very smart. :-)

You've penned some amazing lines, spot on!

Nicely done, Inda!

~ Noodle.

[plainme]

very clever write, I wonder what brought you to writing this, well done Inda!

[Inda]

This one just came to me line by line; doesn't happen often, but it just did!

[plainme]

I guess those ones are the most fun ones, you never know what you're going to get, until you read the full thing and find it filled with personal messages.. :-)

[Lady Ra]

Love this. Short and sweet. Great form. Great skill. Great talent.

[Inda]

thank you

[quinfinn]

good to see you back, friend. this is quite the clever poem...some of these lines are pure platinum. "heartache soldiers on" ...."love on the ledge of reason's edge" this is superb.....well penned!

[Inda]

Thanks, feels good to be back!