Who?

Who?

 

Who told you

I'd be good for you?

Who told you I’d never lie?

-not ever!

Who told you I’d live forever?

Who told you I would never die?

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Great write with a lot of possibility to expand it reach. Stunning set of words brilliantly engaging, dragged the readers to involve the process. Beautiful write.

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Quiet Child]

this is great write! i absolutely love it(: great job!

[Inda]

Thank you! :)

[Quiet Child]

You're welcome! (:

[CreativeStroke]

I always enjoy your writing Inda. This one has a little mystery behind it, which I liked!

[Inda]

Thanks means a lot!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

everbody has to die one day...not sure everbody would lie...perhaps atleast once in a lifetime everbody does...nicely penned

[Inda]

Thanks :)

[Baby Ricochet]

We all lie and die. That's why this solar system's warranty isn't valid

[Inda]

Well put Ricochet!

[Salar Majak]

who? great question imposed here, this is somewhat heart breaking!, beautifully though..
great poem :)

[Inda]

Thank You!

[quinfinn]

who indeed? i would never presume to misrepresent myself to another, so where do these expectations come from? i know what you are saying here. nicely done.

[Inda]

Thank you :)