Miss

Miss

 

A forbidden

conversation,

a hidden

sensation.

A smile and

a kiss,

a hushed longing.

The realization

-there’s something

we’ve missed.

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Oh my.... thinking the unthinkable... :O)

[Inda]

yes, lol thanks for reviewing.

[Baby Ricochet]

Again, nice flow

[Rachel Anderson]

This is amazing. I love it. So much meaning in such a short poem.

[Inda]

thank you, glad you liked it!

[Inda]

Inda, outstanding piece of work here.
With so less words, and a good wordplay,
you get to the point were it's all about.

Loved this little piece of yours! :)

- Elisa

[Inda]

Thanks Elisa, i appreciate you taking the time. :)

You're most welcome Inda :) (when I have time, I'm around) :)