Devoted

Devoted

A Poem by Inda

Devoted

 

She wanted independence,

Young girls often do.

Then she met you,

Changed her credence

-What for?

Another life,

The role of mother and wife;

Every night she waits by the door.

© 2013 Inda


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so recognizable, we've all encountered moments like that. Short and yet brings a long story behind it. Really great flow

Posted 11 Years Ago


so very true....sad but true :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

thanks for the R&R!
It happens this way too often. Very astute.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Yep, thank you!
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
I can so relate to this. It seems a woman has to give up a lot for love just to be left with nothing in return. A great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks; yes this happens too often.
Short and sweet, nice flow...was very good =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like it and it's true. Youth always want independence then they find out "independence" is a bit of an illusion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Yep, it's all bullshit! Thanks Ricochet.
a woman's heart is a deep ocean of secrets and mystery. they are subject to change their minds at any time and for any reason. i mean, what man owns dozens of pairs of shoes? i rest my case. excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Lol, you speak wise words. They are a unique bunch indeed. Thanks for all the great reviews!

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Inda

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