Cravings

Cravings

A Poem by Inda

Cravings

 

Crooked smile; purposeful.

Short skirt,

she’s fresh like dirt.

Attention she craves

like a w***e.

Shows up at my door

-whiskey bottle in hand,

I get it; I understand.

© 2013 Inda


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Wry, clever. But this is deeper than that. The speaker can accept the visitor, for whatever imperfection she presents him with, and that he "gets it" that he "understands"; speaks volumes... I respect that. It's not an easy thing to do always. Understand. Not be judgmental... Thought provoking piece, Inda. I liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks Diego, glad you liked it! :)



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Wry, clever. But this is deeper than that. The speaker can accept the visitor, for whatever imperfection she presents him with, and that he "gets it" that he "understands"; speaks volumes... I respect that. It's not an easy thing to do always. Understand. Not be judgmental... Thought provoking piece, Inda. I liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks Diego, glad you liked it! :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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