Feel Good Fallacy

Feel Good Fallacy

A Poem by Inda

Feel Good Fallacy

 


It hurts when I breathe,


when I cough I bleed.


But when I kill


I’m filled


with euphoria and my pain subsides;


-who cares if someone dies!

© 2013 Inda


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You pointed out the mind of a murderer, a one without empathy, nor the neurotransmitters in the brain to feel any of a sentiment... poignant write.
(I do hope you're not like this lol)... brilliant one!

- Elisa :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you; no I'm not like this :P

11 Years Ago

:) fictional brilliance you're!

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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