I Want to Say...

I Want to Say…

 

I want to say you’re a rose,

the river that flows

or the tree that grows

upon the hill.

So much I want to say,

but my thoughts seem far away;

there’s so much I just don’t feel.

Reviews

[Inda]

She is life, within your words, and she breaths, through all elements! :)
Then you block yourself from true beauty, and run in self-protection, this was
amazing, and I know all is fictional, makes it even more beautiful, as you have a brain,
who can feel, empathy, and write as if...... ;) fantastic!

- Elisa

[Inda]

Thank you, really means a lot that you took the time :)

I loved this! and it was well written.... (sweet friend, know when I have the time, I'll be there always) :D this is a happy night for me :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I want to say........this is a beautiful poem

[Inda]

Thank you!