Shatter

Shatter

A Poem by Inda

Shatter

 


On their way to something,


wondering


what it could be;


Would they succeed?



Will it matter?


-Dreams shatter.


The moon drowned in sorrow,


their passion soon followed.

 

 

© 2013 Inda


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How beautiful inda, a mood fixed on the moon, and influenced by her...
Would an evening as read as the horizon falls, bring rainy nights?
The question is lovely in this write, deeper write, of human feelings
connected to mood of nature. I loved this.
Thank you Inda :)

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa for this great review! :)

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend :)



Reviews

How beautiful inda, a mood fixed on the moon, and influenced by her...
Would an evening as read as the horizon falls, bring rainy nights?
The question is lovely in this write, deeper write, of human feelings
connected to mood of nature. I loved this.
Thank you Inda :)

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you Elisa for this great review! :)

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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