I Fear

I Fear

A Poem by Inda

I Fear

 

I fear the lie

and what it will say,

what it hides;

I fear.

Fear the courage I do not have,

the water my lips cannot taste.

Fear the wound that does not heal

and that kiss

I gave you

by mistake.

I fear loving

and losing

more than reason,

the fear is you’ve stolen my soul.

© 2013 Inda


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That is just the fear of all fears, it is itchy and trearing on your sholder almost...
like it wants to be heard... no salty lies, to be taste in a mouth full of sweet.
Almost devilish again in the ending, eeeerie, but sooo brilliant dear.
As if it's sold to the devil.... loved this.

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


11 Years Ago

I do... it has several layers each time... more profound, than many others reach...
Inda

11 Years Ago

Words cannot express how thankful i am for your kind words. So here's a smiley face, :D

11 Years Ago

I smile back at you Inda, you're precious!

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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