Doctor!

Doctor!

 

Thundering drops of

alcohol

fall

upon my flesh.

Someone screams,

-Doctor!

I scream for

death!

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Whoa I think I'm speechless. It's like an action thriller in a few lines. Love this.

[Inda]

Thank you Carolann, I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Loved it :)

[Adam Whitworth]

brilliant?

[Inda]

Thank you? :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ah man.....it was like a extremely short story!!

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it!