Gone

Gone

 

Gone, it’s all gone

Like the youth,

Like fresh fruit.

It’s all over with, done.

 

No second chance,

last glance.

Romance’s end;

No I don’t want to be your friend.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Oh wow, Inda...that's just crazy good. That last line...ye-ow, sucker punch. Very cool.

[Inda]

Thanks glad you liked it!

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This was great, you should write a sequel called More.

I've felt like this, SO many times.

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it.