Despair Free

A Poem by Inda

Memories of innocence.

Despair Free

Sunlight and bluebirds,

rainbows

and wishes,

candles and cakes.

Smiles on young faces

-despair free.

Potato sack races,

a piñata under a tree.

A fond memory;

“Remember when?”

A picture you show a friend,

a portrait of who you used to be.

© 2013 Inda

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Carolann Dowsett

So lovely, reminds me of my children's birthday parities when they were young. A sweet and beautifully well written poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Tree

I like this alot. Poetry that reaches back. When we were better. Well written piece. Your technical prowess married the creative concept, perfectly

Diego

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks Diego glad you liked it, I enjoyed writing this one.

quinfinn

what a wonderful journey back to the innocence and playful atmosphere of childhood this is! Inda, you impress me more with each fresh write of yours i see.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it and reviewed means a lot!

11 Years Ago

happy to appreciate your art

Adam Whitworth

nice one

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on January 4, 2013
Last Updated on January 4, 2013

Author

Inda

miami, FL

About

I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..