Your Sin

Your Sin

A Poem by Inda

Your Sin

 

The well is dry,

the shops are closed

and you cannot buy a vowel.

The rain starts,

there’s no shelter,

 no umbrella

and someone stole your towel.

The air is cold

and the rain hurts

 the ripe skin.

You hear laughter in the background;

you figure this is hell,

but what’s your sin?

 

© 2013 Inda


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"and you cannot buy a vowel." I think this resonates for a lot of writers here... Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it!

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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