Clear

The elusive truth.

Clear

 

Your absence

Is loud

And clear.

It’s your

presence,

 your complexity

I fear.

It’s the

word s

you’ve never

said

it is the truth

 I never

hear.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

It is amazing how silence and absence has a sound and how that sound affects us. That kind of loss is one of the deepest we shall know. Death is the longest absence we shall ever know. We don't know what is beyond it or if we will see our loved one again. A thought provoking write indeed.

[Inda]

Death is indeed the biggest loss. Glad you liked this piece and thanks for the review.

[Clockwork]

You're welcome

[CreativeStroke]

This was piece was deep and for me... full of truth. Well put my friend.

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed.

[quinfinn]

yes, her lack of presence can be deafening and blinding sometimes...wonderfully captured and expressed

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed!

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is very deep and meaningful. How the absence of someone can speak volumes and though we miss them we fear to hear the real truth which is normally that they don't love us or want to be with us as we do them. Nice work

[Inda]

Yep, glad you picked that up. Thanks for the R&R means a lot.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Andie]

I understood this one loud and clear. It was short but it had a strong meaning behind it. Good job, Inda.

[Inda]

Thanks, it does have strong meaning. Thanks for reviewing.

[Andie]

No problem!

[Adam Whitworth]

thats a short one

[Inda]

Yeah sometimes I write short stuff.