Poison

Poison

A Poem by Inda
"

We are all lied to

"

Poison

 

Smudge of poison on your lips,

Drips and rolls onto your hips.

I drink it up like wine,

Such a fool; I thought you were mine.

© 2012 Inda


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Love can be a deceptive lie, especially when mixed with desire

Posted 11 Years Ago


very powerful words there, nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
K-mo

11 Years Ago

your welcome! I like it
I love it...poisonous lies. Brevity works here. Well done, Inda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it. :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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