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Pocket Queens

Pocket Queens

A Poem by Inda
"

Loosing against a master!

"

Pocket Queens

 

The hands, they shake.

The wind, it blows.

The brave one folds

And I raise the stakes.

 

The old man stares

and thinks.

-something stinks.

His nose flares

 

Pocket queens,

The old man wins.

I humbly add my chips to the pile.

-The old man smiles.

© 2012 Inda


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You've given your best bet at writing this one! Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
every player has their "tell". apparently, he read yours. this is a masterful write. kudos!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Yeah my tell is i bet all in lol.

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Added on December 23, 2012
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Inda
Inda

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