over me

over me

A Poem by Inda
"

Inner turmoil

"

Over me

 

Off balance,

Off road,

Off key

And over you,

Are you over me?

© 2012 Inda


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wow...you been reading my heartbreak poems, or did you find my journal? very cleverly worded and succinctly expressed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed. :)
Nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks.
A very smart play on words . What we feel when we are in turmoil...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked it and reviewed.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome... :)
the age old question. There are some that we never get over, nor do we want to. Well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Yep. Thanks for the review, means a lot.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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