over me
A Poem by
Inda
Inner turmoil
Over
me
Off balance,
Off road,
Off key
And over you,
Are you over me?
© 2012 Inda
Reviews
wow...you been reading my heartbreak poems, or did you find my journal? very cleverly worded and succinctly expressed!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, glad you liked it and reviewed. :)
Nice
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice
A very smart play on words . What we feel when we are in turmoil...
Posted 11 Years Ago
A very smart play on words . What we feel when we are in turmoil...
11 Years Ago
Thanks, glad you liked it and reviewed.
11 Years Ago
You are welcome... :)
the age old question. There are some that we never get over, nor do we want to. Well written
Posted 11 Years Ago
the age old question. There are some that we never get over, nor do we want to. Well written
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Yep. Thanks for the review, means a lot.
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Added on December 22, 2012
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Inda miami, FL
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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the ..
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