Madness

Rambling again!

Madness

 

The sheriff isn’t helping,

The panic is growing.

The monster is growling

And dignity is disappearing.

 

The homes are falling apart,

The fat man is donating his heart

And the women are laughing in the dark.

While the children circle grown men like sharks.

 

 Hope died

The ocean, it dried

up and the madness continues,

it never stops.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

It happens sometimes...in our minds. I like the fat man who's donating his heart! :)

[Inda]

Thanks, i like the fat guy too.

[rnuff]

Wow love that last stanza, powerful deep read. Awesome

[Inda]

Thaks for taking the time to read it, glad you liked it.

[Andie]

Humm. Could this poem possibly be about the state our world is currently in? It seem to me that way...
'And dignity is disappearing' That could be a reference to how little respect people have for themselves and others.
'While children circle grown men like sharks' This could mean crimes are starting to be committed by children instead of just teenagers and adults. This generation is pretty fucked up, if you pardon my language. Things that should have never happened have happened, and it's only getting worse.

Overall, I enjoyed this a lot. Good job, and I look forward to reading some of your other works. :)

[Inda]

Thanks for the review means a lot. I wasnt thinking of anything in particular when i wrote this but it did turn into a statement about the world in a way. Glad u liked it.