Liquid Sunshine

Tank form. 5/7/5/7/7

It falls to the ground

and creates a soft rhythm.

Clear wet drops of rain

renew, replenish, revive.

I pull on my rubber boots.

Reviews

[Seanh12]

This is good well done. Keep it up

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you for submitting this to the Tanka contest. Good one! Helena :)