Memories

Cinquain form.

Memories.
Fluid, cold.
Changing, comforting, colliding.
I am never without
rememberances.

Reviews

[JC]

I can picture you moving through the streets, deep in thought, your thoughts changing, random, in depth, fleeting, i feel you are deep inside yourself, in a period of introspection, like Camus wondering at everything real and imagined and wondering if anything is really real...a nice existential quip that can set off the mind to unravel

[inconsistentsea]

The happiest people must be people that don't think too much. If I do, I can get nihilistic and that can be too much. Is anything real, is anything worth it? But I musn't forget what a wise man once said, "You should bother trying always".

[Helen Crutchett]

Some memories never leave us. Some we try to burying, but they keep surfacing whether we wish them to or not.

Nice write and thank you for submitting this to the cinquain contest!

Helena