dolor

my body cries for you
i reach for you


i rise and swell inside of you
you feel me flow inside your veins


you breathe for me
you love for me


when you love her
it is me you are with
every time


you close your eyes
and see my face


hide behind your words
tell me that its done


but i see it
in every move you make

Reviews

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

You can see the pictures in your head as you readthis poem, it makes me think of a kind of lovers revenge after being cheated on, like shes all he can see as he betrays her. Very well written.

[BLACKCRUSH]

This poem has beautiful imagery , it reminded me of a sweet love song shared between two lovers. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this piece.