Rantings Of A Broken Heart

a poem/song about a broken-hearted girl who's ranting abou the bad things the guy did.

 

*Verse 1*

Just yesterday, I gave you my heart

Today, you gave it back, and it's torn apart

What did I do to you? I gave you my all

It's too late, it's no good, I ain't ever gonna fall

 

*Chorus*

You've got no feelings, and you're so lame

I got hurt and you're to blame

I took the risk, you did the same

It's no use, I lost the game

I gave you my trust, and I expected something more

Won't take that chance ever again, since you walked out my door

 

*Verse 2*

Don't you understand? I ain't goin back

Ain't ever gonna walk on that same track

You broke my heart, and it's never gonna heal

I've given up on love, this time it's for real

 

*End Verse*

No more empty promises,

I've had enough of your lies

Won't play the fool any longer,

I won't fall for your disguise

 

*Chorus (x2)*

 

Last line to change in chorus for 2nd repetition:

I've given up cuz' there's no hope, cuz you walked out my door

 

 

Author's Note

please comment :> i have an actual tune for this song already! :))

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

I can really feel the pain in this song, it's raw and that gives it a strength. Its also, as John Stussy says, a universal theme and a lot of people will be able to relate to it. Its a song set in its generic background well, in that I can imagine people singing it, and reflects very well the hedonistic youth culture. I can't really add anymore because I don't know anything about music.

[-Aurelia Mirella]

You play music too?? What a lovely talent both write and play your own music!

I loved these lyrics. Definitely a song I would listen to as long as it has an amazing beat which I'm sure it does. :]

Again, well done!

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[John Stussy]

Heartbreak's painful, but while it hurts it also teaches lessons. Wariness can be gained, learning to hold onto your heart when you want to give it away. Mistakes are made so you'll be safe later with the lessons gained. Good song, curious to hear the tune you have for it.