I hate you for hurting me. I'm glad you're gone.

I'm just expressing my feelings for RIGHT NOW...

I hate you, I hate you so much.

Still, I couldn't get enough of your touch.

I thought you were serious, but you were a joke like them.

Why'd you have to freakin' pretend?!

 

I guess you could say, i was head over heels.

Shut up. You don't even know how it feels.

You're nothing but a joke, a scam, a lie.

Still, I'm not wishing that you would die.

 

Author's Note

this is not based on something that happened to me, okay? :)

Reviews

[Cassandra]

even if it was based on something.. that'd be OK.
I totally feel for you. It's fine to hate those who hurt us and you said at the end of this piece you don't wish them dead.. so that's a step in the right direction.
But i know how it is to want so much pain for them.. b/c of what they did to you.

Quick write which summed up your feelings well.

[Sel Whiteley]

This peice shows a lot of raw emotion and that makes it strong, you are clearly able to enter a persona's mind and because you say its not based on yourself, we can see your very imaginitive. It is an emotive poem.

[Pharmacy]

Good Job!!!

[emma:)]

Very good. :)

[Sean Augy]

Wow. Really strong. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.
~Augy

[Kitty Forzaken]

ha ha..at least you're not wishing they'd die =)