Hope to Weather

Lay your weary, heavy head next to mine 

the sun is high, the sky is blue

buzzing bees whisper secrets in my ears

I will help you hear them too

Two dreamers we will be

riding on these cumulus clouds

and imaginations fuel

don't worry. I will share with you

my idle thoughts 

of fairies, fiends, finicky friends

Come with me, we will be Kings

in another world.

But Stop.  Drop-----

those burdens, your wearying worries

fell those monsters that give you chase

slough off the tension of rigid limbs

thaw the sadness dimming dreaming eyes

Throw them all away!

To fly we must be light as air

Dreams lie just beyond reality

I know the way, I have oft been there...

Lay your weary, heavy head next to mine

lets share this small safe solace and

I will help you fight your dragons

escape your demons

we will banish the shadows 

together.

Reviews

[Reeti]

It's wonderful to find the introduction of your verse with an inviting discourse. it is a venerating verse to spur others to turning the greener side of life. I love how you've stated 'i will share with you my idle thoughts... in another world." I love the whole melodious tone as you iterate 'lay your weary, heavy head next to mine". it seems that the palm of a revered benefactor is being offered to the seeker of solace. It is true that many lose their way given the troubles of attaining their achievements. for that, I hope that there are many more poems to read with a similar theme written by you or otherwise, others.

[InterijentoWrites]

This is quite a powerful poem. Ah, I only wish I could write poems such as these. I cannot rhyme to save my life. I didnt see any grammatical errors. This is a lovely piece. Im eager to see what else you have written.