When My Mother Told Me

When My Mother Told Me

A Poem by My Name is Brenda and I'm a Writer

When my mother told me that clothes made the woman, she was wearing a ragged housecoat with a pack of Pall Malls in the pocket and a rip on the sleeve. Her knees were red from scrubbing our old linoleum floor with a mixture of lye and laundry soap

When my mother told me to cram all the book learning in my head that I could, she was standing over an ironing board pressing my daddy’s work shirts with one eye on her soap opera – The Guiding Light – and the other on my baby brother who was running around the kitchen with a wet diaper hanging from his backside.

When my mother told me that I could be whatever I wanted to be she was scrubbing our clothes on an old laundry board. The water was cold and her knuckles were red.

When my mother told me that she wrote me every day in her mind and I was the only one of her kids she never worried about, it had been five years since I had seen her face. Two months later she would die before my mother could ever tell me anything again

© 2008 My Name is Brenda and I'm a Writer


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This is very sad and honest. It's as if your mother gave you this advice so you would become more then what she was. However I think a mother is probably the most difficult job and it doesn't seem that she acknowledged the fact that her children were her success. The ending actually struck a cord how you hadn't seen her in five years and then how she passed. Thanks for sharing.

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My Name is Brenda and I'm a Writer
My Name is Brenda and I'm a Writer

Falls Church, VA



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My first novel was inspired by my own childhood on Pungo Creek in rural North Carolina where I grew up in a house shared by three generations. It seems it took a lifetime to write but it was actually.. more..

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