I would

I would

A Poem by Christine
"

inspired by Jeffrey McDaniel's "Conditionals"

"
I'd wear your spine as a necklace if you had a backbone.
I'd eviscerate your insides like a butcher if you had guts.
I'd clean out the litter box it you weren't such a p***y.
I'd make you eat s**t if you weren't already full of it. 
I'd tell you secrets even if you won’t keep them.
I'd try to love you even if I never could.
I'd sleep with you again if I didn't have self respect. 
I'd write you into a poem even if you don’t matter. 
I'd remember you if you were worth remembering.
I'd forget you if I could. 

© 2013 Christine


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this was different to alot of things iv read i cant decide if i liked it or not. I cant seem to understand it it seems very twisted. Although it had great meaning to it and different isnt always a bad thing keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love how up front, straight forward and daring this is. You just don't care, you say how it is, and it shows in your writing and I love it. I love writers that don't hold back. This is poetry, you're suppsed to unleash all your emotion into the piece. You seem to grasp that concept. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is great stuff
I enjoyed that


Posted 11 Years Ago


Biting. I like the teeth of it. I was a bit taken back. Sums up a good amount of pain and spits it back like hot coals. Kudos. Stay safe in Boston.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So raw and painful. I really enjoyed it. I like the sassy bitterness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 27, 2013
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Christine
Christine

Boston, MA



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