Hang Nails

It was impossible for me to notice the hang nail on your right index finger;

we were holding hands before we had the chance to make it 

point out the problem.

had I known the friction of our bodies would crack open your skin,

I would have told you to keep your fingernails short 

so dirt wouldn't get underneath them

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

well thought out image and comparison.
nicely written,
dana

[zainul]

Creative idea!

[Jack...]

This is funny. It's strange the things we notice.

[Luke L]

hahaha that's awesome! I love it :)

[Wórdsmíth]

well written