Charlotte

Charlotte

A Poem by Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

Her eyes are the color of hell.
Her hair is long and it flows down her back,
swishing every time she makes a move.
Her smile is cruel and screams that she has
broken a promise.
She is the worst.
She is the one that haunts you at night.
She is the one that wakes up with you at dawn.
She is everything.
Everything to you.
And her name is Charlotte.

© 2011 Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff


Author's Note

Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
Short but whatever lol. I don't know where I got the inspiration for this *shrugs*

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i love this, it really speaks about her character :3 :)!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love how at the end you said her name is charlotte, and how all of it was leading up to that one simple yet powerful sentance. great write c:

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it, it brings life to the character charlotte..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i like the first line you wrote indicates that there is a beast in the beauty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was great. I could picture the girl perfectly. It was like you were painting a picture of this character and only describing her and nothing else. It was good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, very, very powerful write. Truly, great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was really good. I could totally picture what this Charlotte character looked and acted like. It was good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow. I really like this. Good jobb

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

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