Why Me?

Why do you like to hurt me?
Is it fun to watch needles gouge
my eyes out?
Why do you say those words?
Those words that always stab knives
in my back.
It's because you just don't understand,
what it's like for me to be
living in this world.
It's because you don't see my pain,
hidden under my fake laughs and smiles.
Why is it me?
Why don't you choose any other kids?
Is it because you just don't understand?
Or is it because you secretly know?

Author's Note

I know that it's shitty and whiney but whatever lol

Reviews

[Katelyn]

Great poem. I love the last two lines the most.

[Krystyna Herst]

Not s****y, not whiny, it's better than anything I could ever write. Nice work :D

[Xyxyshsbbxhx]

You are really expressing true emotion. I give you huge props. I hope if this is true that you get through it. You inspire me bro.

[HeIsWe]

Nice job

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i don't think its as bad as you think it is. this is a good poem that represent what you think.

[I Hate Humans]

This was beautiful :) just because you show your real emotions doesn't mean your whiney. I could relate a lot. Keep writing :)

[paradise]

ahh nah its not s**t well done

[The Girl with the smile]

This poem is beautifully written. It connects well with its readers. The emotion can be felt in each sentence. Its great!!

[idk]

I love it, it's not even close to being s****y and I barely found it whiney. Great poem, keep writing more!

[Tai Ryens]

S****y? Far from that. Whiney? Definitely, but whining about your problems in a poem gives it more of a little edge to it that seems personal. What's goes down deeper than a writer who lets out emotion with a pen? Not much, I guarantee that, in fact, I think you should rant a little more, it gives it that edge that makes it more original, creative, etc. Great job on this poem, keep it up!