Snowing

The snow outside furiously falls in dismal dreary drops

And I inside, on looking out feel forsaken and forgot

The darkness dampens daylight, while the sleet straightly slops

On the white wet walks, each falling flake an irritating iridescent dot

Author's Note

an exercise in alliteration and description

Reviews

[Little Birdie]

Great alliteration you have here, creates quite an ambience, not a lot of writers can pull it off so smoothly. I salute you.

[LoveYourself]

I like this poem..short and sweet. Great job! :)
~Missy OwO~