uneven

i seen hell at its happiness and earth at its worse instant yes the drugs equivalent holding its wight with the liquid substance as my mind marinades in chaotic thoughts i suffer from the same disease judas had that landed jesus on the cross they say its greed that entrees and intervene with your best interest you could flirt with death in her blue c**k tale dress and get seduce by the best temptress.

Reviews

[Crys]

I really like the emotion you bring into your writing...

But please please please start using stanza's or commas. Just some form of punctuation because I lose track of where you intend the sentence to stop.

[Dutch Jr.]

I like your rhyming... you got skills