nomore

it was your fragrances enableing my will to move on the ripe apple of sin the velvet that lace your pandora box isolated emotions drop. slowly down this time peace this crystal ball indicates that your better off without me. speak softly but manipulate what i want to hear salt water Fertilize and blossoms into transparent tears these tragic mirrors reflect no image because your not near. just a weaken will to live hanging by a single fabric if bitterness

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[just rose.]

"it was your fragrances enableing my will to move on the ripe apple of sin the velvet that lace your pandora box isolated emotions drop" is a very, very good line. there's a lot happening in that line, and the flow of it works. well done.

[Dutch Jr.]

I like this... you have vivid description of feelings and I like your style. The only thing I would suggest is break your poems into stanzas, because it makes it easier to read.