Maybe it really is hard to write a unique poem about love, is it because we are too busy falling in and out of love? Or is it just a meme that our culture has become addicted to that we can't write about it with objectivity.
I like your piece, it just makes me realize how love is problematic, more to write about then to live I mean. Sometimes I wonder if I should just stick clear of it as a topic because it's so tired and cliche. What do you think?
Love is such a need, pretending to be something it is not. God knows....
Your poem captures all the facets of the emotion, we call love. In just 11 lines, you have completed this task and leave the reader filled with knowledge and understanding of what love means. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
True Love is the most powerful emotion any of us have, it always take two for what that will be.
It can cause the worst pain anyone has known, or be the most beautiful thing two people can ever have, living with the rest of the world, that is not, as we know perfect.
John ;-)
The aim of life is to live, and to live means to be aware, joyously, serenely, divinely aware...
And this is why I write: AWARENESS... It is not in the moment that I tasted the delicacies of life .. more..