Consequences

The complications

Of my actions

Consequences and reactions

With the pain I see in you

I cannot help but to peruse

The idea that I’m no good for you

So I entertain the thought

But too selfish to let go

I know, yes I just know

That I could never throw

Away the feelings you give me

So again with the selfishness

That dominates my soul

With the pain you go through

I hurt too

Yes, you drag me with you

Until I am neither me

Nor you

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

"The complications
Of my actions
Consequences and reactions
With the pain I see in you"
Great, great write. A girl knowing she doesn't love her boyfriend/husband but keeping him anyway even though she can see he is hurt, perhaps? Then he's dragging her down with him because she refuses to let go.

[SimplyDisastrous]

My favorite lines are "I cannot help but to peruse

The idea that I’m no good for you" Yay! It rhymes! Very nice piece.

[dryice]

it pricks...

[Jonathan Ballam]

This poem picks one up in a whirlwind of fears and words, and leaves you embaressed and hurt on the pavement. When you start to examine the cuts on your legs, you start to learn a thing or two.

[WaitingToBeFound]

Really moving poem, and I agree, the last lines are really great and extremely powerful, nice job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like the last lines a lot.
"Until I am neither me
Nor you"
You told a very good story of action and the final results.
A excellent poem.
Coyote