You like my face.

This is basically written for the "Do I like your face" contest created by Sarah Tortora.

My eyes are blue

And I love you

My face is pale

High on the scale

Of all cute kids

And on my lids

Is bright and green

You call me "Scene"

My lips are pink

My heart does sink

To think that this

Is all that is

My face, you judge?

You see a smudge?

I'm not surprised

Please realize

That I am me

My name's Kelly

You like my face

I win, first place.

Author's Note

haha. you don't have to take this seriously. it's just for my friend's contest.

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... a very very well written poem indeed !!! :)
I like it a lot ... so easy to understand and follow and the flow is just amazing :)
so light and happy is the tone :)
a really good piece I must say :) :D

[Drew Wade]

ahh, this is a nice poem, good attention to meter, just a couple rough spots... the main one I saw is "My face, you judge." aggh, I'm just not a huge fan of saying things the way they would never be said in an actual conversation, but tons of people would disagree with me.. however, for the rest, I thought that this poem was witty and cute, and excellent. good job.

[Emmie]

Hehe... how creative. I liked your rhyme scheme, and the meter was good. Keep writing. =_ I would love to see more pieces like this from you in the future!