Falling

Falling out of love,

Falling in again,

Falling up, down,

upside-down,

through a hole and into wonderland

I dream of white rabbits

upon their white horses

bearing me away to looking glass scenes

safari adventures across checkerboard skies

we fall together

 

Falling out of love,

Falling in again,

Falling left, right,

on the ground,

around the world in eighty days

I dream of stone lions

upon their stone gaurd posts

bearing me away to wildflower parkinglots

hot air baloon journeys over broken mirror reflections

we fall together.

Reviews

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Wow. Absolutely loved this in every way. Your a really amazing poet, keep it up.

[bluessadmood]

i love the way you connect falling in love then falling out of it ,like heartbreaks ,like chasing your love here and there,you see those lost hopes as you chase hopes of seeing wonderland,the rabbits ,the white horses,safari adventures,around the word in eight days,dreams of stone lions of hot ballons journeys through a broken mirror,but as you see they are far away so you also see you are both falling away and its again falling out of love,some wonderful dreamy ideas i see here,true romantic and wild imagination,this is great writing,so inspiring,so exciting to read,great writing indeed and i just loved it,wonderful

[Cortney Lynn]

kelly lynch. this is so adorable. like i'm printing this out to put it on my wall.

ps! you forgot an "s" in "looking glass scenes." everything else is gramatically correct i believe?