Behind Black Hair She Hides

one of my older ones

behind black hair hides 
something that I love 
something I care for 
something I strive for 
something I can talk to for hours 
something I cant seem to get enough of 
something that makes me laugh smile joke grin even admire 
behind black hair she is strong 
behind black hair she is weak 
behind black hair old demons torment her 
behind black hair she blushes so people will never know 
behind black hair she hides her feelings but still expresses them behind black hair she is safe even from me

Reviews

[April Child]

It's a beautiful sentiment. Well chosen words that capture that love and admiration, almost wonder.

Only thing I would suggest is that you take out the repetitions of 'something' and 'behind black hair' I think it still works without losing anything :)

Nice poem.