I need an opening line

I need an opening line

Now that I think about it this should do fine

No to long not to short

Something easy to retort

Now to fill this poem with romantic words

Maybe something about how you’re like the birds

You need your space

Some where you can hide your face

Hide it from this cruel world

Let it be open and unfurled

But this means being away from me as well

And for me this is truly hell

For I will never get to see u shine

But its ok, I think…. ill be fine

Reviews

[iammerideth]

hmmm. i hope you will be fine...
cause this was truly awesome. i think that if yo u want to becaome a better your definately on the right track cause this was great.